Writing your psychology personal statement can feel like a daunting task – it’s a popular subject with plenty of applicants, so how can you stand out from the crowd?
We’ve spoken to psychology admissions experts at four UK universities to get the lowdown on exactly what they want to see in your personal statement.
Before you sit down to write your personal statement, do a bit of research to make sure you know exactly what the course entails, and that you have a realistic idea of what you’ll be doing on it.
“For me, understanding the subject is key,” says Dr Ebony Murray, academic course leader for psychology at the University of Gloucestershire.
“Students who have grasped the subject and what psychology looks like as a university degree present strong personal statements; they show their enthusiasm for accurate material (for example, the importance of research and research methods) and realistic achievements of the next three or four years (for example, students will not finish an undergraduate degree and be a clinical psychologist).
“Some students mis-interpret what they’ll learn on the course and that doesn’t bode well for the personal statement.”
“Open up the websites of the universities you want to apply to and go to the specific course pages," says Ruth Boyce, schools and colleges development officer at the University of Winchester.
The whole point of a personal statement is that it’s all about you – don’t lose sight of that when writing yours.
“We want to see why YOU want to study psychology," says Andrew Martin, psychology lecturer at the University of Kent. "What is it about psychology that interests you? Show that you understand what a psychology degree involves.
“We have all had personal experiences that make us interested in mental health, cognition, forensic psychology and so on, but try to weave these experiences with books you have read or scientific papers that have caught your eye."
Ebony at the University of Gloucestershire highlights a common pitfall in psychology personal statements.
“Given the topic, it’s not unusual to see personal statements where students have given too much personal information in terms of speaking about their own life events, mental health challenges, learning difficulties, or similar.
“This loops back around to my above point about students mis-interpreting the degree and what they will realistically learn and achieve whilst on the course. In many instances, studying psychology as an undergraduate degree won’t help them fully understand their own experiences, and for others, some of the topics on the course may even be a trigger. Personal touches are usually a nice addition, but know when to not go too far."
“Many students are drawn to psychology because of their own personal experiences, but just think carefully about how you share,” says Ruth at the University of Winchester.
“For example, if you want to mention the mental health of a friend as a reason for your interest, this is fine providing you keep your writing academic and subject focused rather than an emotional narrative.
The admissions tutor should have a clear idea of exactly why you want to study psychology after reading your personal statement.
“Psychologists know better than most that motivation is the key to success, so admissions tutors will be looking for you to provide evidence of your motivation to study psychology,” says Dr Adam Jowett, associate head of school (recruitment and marketing) at Coventry University's School of Psychological, Social and Behavioural Sciences.
Psychology is a wide-ranging subject, and admissions tutors want to see that you understand that.
"During the degree you will have the opportunity to examine all aspects of human experience and behaviour, employing different perspectives within psychology, such as biological, cognitive, social, developmental, and individual differences," says Ruth at the University of Winchester.
“Psychology is a broad subject and showing evidence of engaging with any of the areas of psychology is valuable, “ says Ebony at the University of Gloucestershire.
“For example, some students have worked as teaching assistants and worked with children with developmental disorders; some students have volunteered or worked within prison-based services, or within the NHS, or for mental health charities.
Don’t worry if you haven’t had clinical work experience – it’s well worth thinking of other stuff you’ve done, and ways it might be relevant to a psychology degree.
“Psychology is such a broad subject that you can link almost any kind of work experience or extracurricular activity to the subject,” says Adam from Coventry University.
“For instance, if you play a sport, you could use this to demonstrate an interest in sport psychology or use retail work experience to demonstrate skills and interest in understanding consumer behaviour. The key to an excellent personal statement is to link your experience to psychology and demonstrate transferrable skills."
Ruth from the University of Winchester elaborates on some of the skills that could be particularly relevant for a psychology degree. “In addition to subject knowledge, psychology students also develop skills in communication; numeracy; analysis; teamwork; critical thinking; computing; independent learning; and many others.
“So, you can be confident to use your hobbies or extra-curricular interests to highlight these skills in your statement so universities can see you will have the necessary skills to thrive on the course.”
Rather than just listing out everything you’ve done, it’s much better to reflect on what you learned from those experiences.
“Many students will share work experience, or volunteering, but rather than what you did, try to reflect on your experiences," says Ruth at the University of Winchester.
The best personal statements avoid sweeping generalisations, and keep things both personal and detailed.
When you sit down to write the first draft of your personal statement, don’t worry about editing yourself – that will come later with subsequent drafts once you’ve honed exactly what you want to say.
“Don’t edit yourself as you write. Own the fact that you are not producing the best thing ever as you write it for the first time, just write,” says Ruth.
“The power of the personal statement is in the editing and polishing and you’re likely to do that a lot before you’re happy with it. When editing, you can’t include everything you have ever studied and depending on your qualifications you might have an EPQ or A-level that feels less relevant to your application, but try to focus on any transferable skills you have gained.
A psychology degree has loads of transferable skills, and admissions tutors won’t necessarily expect you to have a clearly defined career path at this stage.
“Due to the wide range of skills, and the rigour with which you are taught, training in psychology is widely accepted as providing an excellent preparation for many careers” says Ruth
“If you want to be a clinical psychologist then you can tell us in your conclusion, but don’t worry if you are not sure what you want to do yet, just don’t put a career because you think it will look good.”
Try to be honest and original. It is also a good idea to proofread and get someone else to read to make sure it is error free and written well. Andrew Martin (Psychology Lecturer at the University of Kent),
A psychology degree, and a career after a psychology degree, will always result in the person needing to communicate via writing.
Whether they’re writing research reports, clinical reports, other essays, or just writing emails day-to-day, their written communication skills will be under scrutiny. As such, proof-read; ask a friend or a family member to proof-read; write clearly and concisely; use paragraphs suitably.
If you’re submitting a personal statement with more than a couple of grammatical errors and/or typos (etc), that’s not a great sign for the next three years and beyond. Dr Ebony Murray (Academic Course Leader for Psychology and Lecturer in Psychology, University of Gloucestershire),
We can use psychology to our advantage here. Psychological research suggests that admissions tutors perceive poorly written statements, misuse of humour and being negative about previous education unfavourably when assessing personal statements. So avoid those things.
Remember that a personal statement should be written to persuade the admissions tutor that you're a good fit for the course and have the skills to succeed. Put yourself in their shoes and think about what would convince you.
Be honest but avoid false modesty. Sell yourself as a future psychologist in the making. Dr Adam Jowett (Associate Head of School (Recruitment and Marketing) at Coventry University's School of Psychological, Social and Behavioural Sciences),
